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Translation and its discontents

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Translator and Fudan University professor Jiang Zhihui has been accused of rape. ESWN has the translation of a YWeekend story:

Fudan University associate professor Jiang Zhihui translates at the rapid rate of two books per year and is labeled as the "wild man of translation" "who has a book in which there are 55 mistakes in the first 10 pages." Many netizens questioned how such 'academic books' can ever be published? Do the publishing houses have a good system to screen and evaluate and is anyone ever held accountable?

In recent years, the quality of translations in China has dropped across the board. Why is that? Can the publishing industry cope with this hard problem? The reporter found out that most of the translations of scholastic works in mainland China operate in the 'fast food" model and therefore it was inevitable that the readers are dissatisfied.

The netizen Yuxiong wrote a post titled "Jiang Zhihui: The Chinese translation who 'raped Arendt's "The Life of Mind"'" which was widely disseminated. This post lists fifty-five errors of Jiang's translation of "The Life of Mind: Thinking") (Jiangsu Education Publishing) in just the first ten pages alone. The post accused Jiang Zhihui of "not translating Arendt, but raping her instead."

Poor-quality translation is hardly the only problem plaguing China's bottom-line-driven publishing industry, but it's certainly one of the more entertaining. Nitpicking vocabulary and sentence structure is something anyone can do, and some people have even found ways of making it pay.

Zhu Naichang, for example, translated E. M. Forster's classic work of criticism, The Aspects of the Novel. Zhu's book, an English-Chinese facing-page version, works as a case study of translation as well as an introduction to the art of fiction writing. It's actually five translations in one—Zhu provides extensive footnotes in which he highlights the less-than-perfect renderings of earlier translators and explains why his version is better.

This seems like an appropriate post for a mention of the group blog TransNator (翻疫終結者), which is devoted to outright mistakes in Chinese translations—mistakes that can nearly always be chalked up to the translator misunderstanding the original text (basically what Jiang Zhihui is accused of doing). Try this great post from August for starters—it picks apart the 1999 Chinese translation of William Gibson's Neuromancer.

In other translation news, Paper Republic notes that yesterday, 30 September, was International Translation Day, which had the theme "Don't Shoot the Messenger" this year.

Does that include translators like Jiang Zhihui who've already committed rape against original works? Or, as those TransNators suggest in a wonderful rant against stilted translationese, maybe we readers should all just kill ourselves first.

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Earlier this year, I was in a meeting with a group of English-Chinese translators, all of whom voiced concerns about the quality of recent literary translations into Chinese. One translator said he doesn't even bother to read translations from the eighties onward because they compare so poorly to earlier translations (from the twenties and thirties, for example).

The main culprits seem to be low translation wages and impossible deadlines set by local publishers. Nearly all of the Chinese translators in our meeting complained that they were unable to do justice to their translations in the time alloted by publishers. Books that should take between 4-6 months to properly translate and research are being completed in 1-2 months; this results in clunky and often unreadable translations that sell poorly and disappoint readers.

Although the field of Chinese-English translation suffers from some of the same problems (low wages, poor editing at small academic presses, etc.), foreign publisher deadlines are much more realistic. I spent 7 months translating Guo Xiaolu's 100,000-character novel Village of Stone. Howard Goldblatt spent one year on his painstaking translation of Jiang Rong's much longer novel Wolf Totem. It's hard to imagine a Chinese translator being allowed to spend 6 months, much less a year, translating an English, French, Russian or Japanese novel of similar length.

The situation is even worse in the world of film. Although Chinese viewers have access to an incredible variety of pirated films - from the latest Hollywood blockbusters to classics by Fellini, Tarkovsky, Almodovar and Kurosawa - the Chinese subtitles are so poor that they obscure the original meaning. It's not just that they are rendered into translationese or riddled with mistakes; sometimes the subtitles are made-up, re-scripted or cribbed from other films. When watching foreign films with Chinese friends, I realize that we are watching two entirely different films.

May I say that China is not just lost in transition, but also definitely lost in translation.

What an outrageous and misleading first line. The man has only been accused of bad translation. If I was the professor I would be consulting a lawyer.

No jo, he really has been accused of literal rape; Joel's only just translated the fact (accurately).

Most Chinese to English translation around the world is done by native Chinese. They do their best, but this breach of the cardinal rule of translation, work INTO your mother tongue, means that quality ranges from barely acceptable to flatly appalling, across the board, from the China Daily's laughable headline-writing to arcane chemical patents. As said, the Chinese working into English do their best, but there is a chronic shortage of native-English writers able to do this work and for those who do master the skill, which takes five-ten years, pay is a joke. As a result, the only non-Chinese who get into C>E translation are sinophiles working largely out of personal interest. Until the Chinese learn to (a) recognise and (b) appreciate good translation into English and its importance, this situation will go on and everything written in English coming out of China will make its originator look stupid and amateurish (click on almost any Chinese company's bilingual website).

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